Beauty is what by clarity of vision
more we learn greater we know truth
as we read history as mirrored by facts
yet time seems paradox in hand by realty....
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yet rain is indebted to clouds
mystery dissipates by illusion
reason never defies riffs of truth
i am as i am by commiseration
ocean is beyond reach of moon
horizon befuddles in silhouettes
tide and ebb reason to reason
all earthly riffle by rise and fall
love of Florence ramifies by colors
do we ever judge our own strength?
every bits of raves up redounds
rainbow rills on illusion by extermination
all of your poetry is driven by deep philosiphical reflections. your metaphors used to touch on the topics of traversing time and space, humanity, religion, true beauty created by nature, the meaning of our lives and so much more that weighs upon the intellectual human mind. some hidden by illusions or the minds eye. ocean is beyond reach of moon horizon befuddles in silhouettes tide and ebb reason to reason all earthly riffle by rise and fall You have succsessfully put illusion into your deepths of thinking. i think that if someone without much self-reflection or the yearning to understand something higher than thier intellect read this they would simply skip right over it not thinking twice about trying to understand that this poem has a true meaning and leaving no comment because they don't understand the meaning, but someone with higher level of thinking will read it and understand your metaphors and elegant style of writing. and would walk away not only pondering your words but taking a piece of your ideals with them to stay, the meanings hidden behind the illusion of your words are deep and touching. once again a beautiful, meaningful piece. kudos my friend. jen
you got the talent to put light on the greatest questions of thinking... your words bring us into a moment of doubt, a minute of reflection, I like when I find some kind of work...thanks for the invitation!
You got me thinking. Very deep and thoughtful. Thankyou
‘…reason never defies riffs of truth…’ Sound sane reason is equal to Truth ‘…rainbow rills on illusion by extermination’ Here poetic twist where poor rainbow in jeopardy of illusion… Contemplative poem…thanks sharing… 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK
your words make it sound more like an illusion... clever usage of words, fulfilling the concept of an illsuion.
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
life of the Man is the big illusion love also is one i loved rainbow one day i discovered it was also an illusion like all thanks and good piece
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mysterious. Deep meaning. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it