! ! ! Grace Of Love! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

There's an encouraging feeling of wealth and warmth. On the other hand, if there's love. As a further encouragement I should remember John Keats.

Showing love to your poem. Great poem! It great of how you describe the graces of love with the beautifulness of Earth, the snow to the blue sea. You show how beatuiful side of Earth as a mean to show the graces of love, A great combination of both! I'm sorry if I don't make any sense in my comment.

love is beautifully personified in this poem with the elements of nature...

This poem is excellent. There are a few 'bugs' in it. The word 'bequeathing' doesn't sound right to me. It is associated more with death and you're talking of 'warmth' in a beneficial way. 'Betiding' is an unusual word. Good/Bad? Remove 'the' from 'the river runs.' That way the line is consistent with the others. Then instead of 'to mingle, ' mingles alone reads better, as most of the poem is devoid of articles and prepositions. And so remove 'the' from 'the skin of hope.' Other than that you have a very lively poem and a great vocabulary. Kaye Cee

A lovely work which i associated with a spiritual awakening on first reading, therefore the word 'bequeathing' jarred on me also

wonderful visual metaphors of color like: ''rock of the heart intones in blue passion when chilled by snow '' in a descriptive poem.....I can see here only colors and feelings and i understand the nature like a blind woman...10+++

a brilliant verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! given 10

lovely well written piece...thanks for sharing it with us...

A poem which examplifies enigmatic incoherence of shades of nature yet underlines the beauty of the whole canvas!

really confusing (not a bad thing) but gets better every time you read it, and some imagery in here is extremly euphonic and touching