! ! ! Grace Of Love! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! Grace Of Love! ! !

Rating: 4.2

Grace sprinkles over the green
beauty of love engraves earthly god
rock of the heart intones in blue
passion when chilled by snow

desire seems assuaged by hope
rhythm reels through the dream
milling the shadow of clouds
sun ascends slowly in scarlet red
dew on the meadow awaits to glow
warmth does exist bequeathing

thirst expires around arms of bliss
river runs betiding from hill
mingles into blue of the sea
gleams of light enlightens shadow

newness stuns by confluence
plumes obstinate resurrects
sprucing skin of hope
breath burns brilliant by grace of love

Herod 04 November 2008

beautfiul imagery and great diction beauty seems assauged by hope...I couldn't agree with you more

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Keith Gaboury 03 November 2008

Good rhythm and tone, nice work.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 03 November 2008

absolutely amazing you have talent and im glad you shared it nice one :)

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Triin Kann 22 October 2008

An amazing write. So beautiful & well put together. 10!

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Paige Galloway 21 October 2008

Great use of words. I love how it was put together!

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Marieta Maglas 29 June 2009

wonderful visual metaphors of color like: ''rock of the heart intones in blue passion when chilled by snow '' in a descriptive poem.....I can see here only colors and feelings and i understand the nature like a blind woman...10+++

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a brilliant verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! given 10

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Fiona Davidson 08 November 2008

lovely well written piece...thanks for sharing it with us...

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 05 November 2008

A poem which examplifies enigmatic incoherence of shades of nature yet underlines the beauty of the whole canvas!

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Nick G 04 November 2008

really confusing (not a bad thing) but gets better every time you read it, and some imagery in here is extremly euphonic and touching

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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