Thursday, August 14, 2014
As Night Listens Comments
Rating: ★4.3
night listens to know myth of mystery to sojourn
as I here sigh of breeze in trees redoubling yore
enough for me to rejoice by mellow silence at dawn
rhythm redounds entreating dream for truth to reckon.
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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
17 August 2014
A powerful and provocative piece my friend!
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12/7/2025 3:25:10 PM # 1.0.0
Very good ideas and imagery in your poem, yet the words don't portray it well in this poem. Your rhythm is broken down and it seems that the words you use may have something to do with it. Something to do with how you are putting them together perhaps. Not quite sure. Your thoughts are concise, I like them. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn