as the world spins
we move faster and as we move faster
the world becomes more of a blur
The wind in my eyes and the frozen tears
keep me from being so sad that I can not move on
As we all know moving on is a part of life
however moving on is as painful as a dirty needle being shoved in my eye
because shoving a dirty needle in my eye would cause me go blind
but when I find the one I love I will a blind person seeing for the first time.
This poem is a story of all kinds of emotions that are so true to the world as it spins! ! !
Beautiful Caitlin, simply beautiful. I do wish you would write one about Dahlila, or Simon... They would be better because of their true emotion... Good luck!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How many times should i say, it is a superfine. xlent, brilliant....................................... go on composing poem. it is sure that poem may not give u any monetary benefit but u will get peace and will be able to inspire the world for good deeds. keep it up