As Tree Humbles Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
As Tree Humbles
I feel silent and dumb
As I am not in position to raise thumb
For my contribution toward poetical activities
May be it is lacking some of the best qualities
I go for extending support
For new poets to reach at port
With their novel ideas in poems
As it is very much concerning them
I love to read and appreciate the theme
I consider them fresh flowers from Him
I go as far as possible in commenting
But alas1 find no response is forthcoming
Some of the poems go unnoticed
As if no one is interested
Well I go down with deep feeling
From within certainly it is killing
I had taken vow that I will post one
Read three poems from any one
Comment suitably and encourage
Here I feel reverse encouragement
Still I feel no grudge
As they are poets badge
But one thing is sure
They fail I reciprocating somewhere
As tree humbles while bending
The poets should feel honored while sending
Their observation on poem with open find
I think this will serve the purpose at the end
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Re: As tree humbles (Score: 1) by dwm on Thursday, November 21,2013 (10: 52: 04) Don't worry about what your comment is. If your comment is ignored, it isn't your fault. You are not a bad poet. What you have to say is worth reading. It is just labor some trying to decypher and decode your rhyming. Don't want to keep banging on this but try to write without rhyming you may get more responses. Good luck
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