Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 861,427 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

All Dreams Not Come True ###309(In 500)

Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

All dreams may not come true
All credits due may not accrue
But with true reflection in mind
Ideas newer and newer may emerge and find
though may not be the nature too so kind

Dreaming in day time is not at all good
Good thoughts and efforts work as food
Earnest efforts to come out of wood
Failure may stun and you loose the hope
Still not difficult to walk on tight rope

It is not bad to dream for high sky
Speak always truth and do not lie
You may not have wings to fly
Still nothing wrong to work and try
No need to think or needlessly cry

You must have third sense to rise
All acts should be sensible and wise
Rise and fall is part of the game
Goal and ideas you must frame
No use trying luck or fate to blame

What ever you do must be with resolve?
Take full blame and never try to absolve
Put in best efforts to come out and solve
Full dedication and make everybody to involve
Try to mix with all as soluble dissolve

Despite put in best efforts it may not materialize
Failure may be sure but we may not visualize
All draw backs reasons before us but can't analyze
Complete system may run into trouble and paralyze
Still strive very hard to see the reason and synchronize

Complete days routine and reflections of day's thoughts
In night, thoughts clash and hard won battles are fought
Freedom and joy sincerely thought and brought
Stealing in day time but not easily caught
Simply night dreaming when lying in the cot

Continue to seek solution in dream,
Energy not focused but travel in beam
Try very hard and work as team,
Good efforts in direction but not as power game
Not letting any opportunity with excuses lame

So I find easy way to seek refuge in night
Lie low and have good say without light
more and more attention I try to pay
Always hope to find way in form of ray
washing shores with water at feet of bay.

Life doesn't end with setting of day
Sun may rise again with bright ray
Your hopes may be high and tall
Vast horizon may lie open for all
Try for success without any fall

Come what may be the slogan
Life and opportunities may begun
Nothing to loose with worth attempt
Sometimes you may gain with action prompt

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Comments about All Dreams Not Come True ###309(In 500) by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Vinita Nahata (4/6/2020 10:05:00 AM)

    Very inspirational poem. Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Magadha Raini (2/18/2020 7:18:00 PM)

    Your dreams not true. I am more popular than you.I have only 1 poem. Soon maybe none but still very popular! ! !(Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (2/17/2020 4:20:00 AM)

    Continue to seek solution in dream,
    Energy not focused but travel in beam
    Try very hard and work as team,
    Good efforts in direction but not as power game
    Not letting any opportunity with excuses lame..// superb poem penned; yeah right you are that All Dreams Come not True(Report)Reply

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  • Abhishek Singh (10/22/2019 8:34:00 AM)

    very nice poem sir.very insightful and inspirational.(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/16/2019 5:14:00 AM)

    Rise and fall is part of the game
    Goal and ideas you must frame
    No use trying luck or fate to blame.. a very good poem dear Amathalal. tony(Report)Reply

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  • Syedah Maryam Iqbal t (5/9/2019 6:40:00 AM)

    Nice very nice impressive(Report)Reply

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  • Dhananjay MohapatraDhananjay Mohapatra (2/23/2019 2:21:00 AM)

    waw really right sir. it is a nice poem(Report)Reply

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  • Inguruwattadewage Pushpadewa Chaminda (11/11/2018 7:20:00 AM)

    Dear poet do you think that some of dreams come true it s a nice poem thanks(Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (10/22/2018 12:57:00 AM)

    Life doesn't end with setting of day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Yes, all dreams do not, and need not come true,
    A beautiful poem


    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall(Report)Reply

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  • Poor English (9/11/2018 6:33:00 AM)

    You don't deserve to be rated at all. Just a rubbishy write.(Report)Reply

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  • Ndambwe Mali Lucien - Cornerstone (5/10/2018 6:02:00 AM)

    Thanks A Lot For Encouraging And Advicing Us Through Poem, I Keep It In My Mind.(Report)Reply

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  • Chandan DeyChandan Dey (4/26/2018 1:09:00 PM)

    It's an extraordinary inspirational poem. I'm really moved reading this poem. Thanks for sharing with us.(Report)Reply

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  • Gurleen Kaur NarangGurleen Kaur Narang (8/3/2017 11:27:00 AM)

    Loved each & every word of the poem.The answers to so many questions are beautifully answered in your poem!(Report)Reply

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  • Upendra Upm (4/5/2017 1:53:00 AM)

    Continue to seek solution in dream is an age old saying -a reflection of precept is Brahma sutra, it goes like
    Suchakacha hi sutre, aachaka chahi tat hita./-that means dream clearly indicates a solution, the poet has brilliantly
    fished th eprecept and brought out in a verse which is pure gold counselling for young generations.(Report)Reply

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  • Richard Wlodarski (12/26/2016 3:13:00 PM)

    Sir, your poem motivates and inspires to the extent that still not difficult to walk tight rope. Really enjoyed it!
    I invite you to read and comment/rate some of my poetry. Thank you.(Report)Reply

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  • Mithilesh YadavMithilesh Yadav (11/26/2016 12:14:00 PM)

    You may not have wings to fly
    Still nothing wrong to work and try
    No need to think or needlessly cry


    Loved it sirji..... Thanx for sharing(Report)Reply

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  • Preston MwiingaPreston Mwiinga (9/5/2016 3:35:00 PM)

    Here i am commentingb on legends and appreciating their works(Report)Reply

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  • Rose KananaRose Kanana (9/2/2016 12:03:00 PM)

    i like the message...expectations in control

    All acts should be sensible and wise
    Rise and fall is part of the game
    Goal and ideas you must frame(Report)Reply

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  • Ahmed Gumaa SiddiekAhmed Gumaa Siddiek (8/11/2016 10:34:00 PM)

    It is not bad to dream for high sky
    Speak always truth and do not lie
    You may not have wings to fly
    Still nothing wrong to work and try
    No need to think or needlessly cry

    beautiful poem with great wisdom.(Report)Reply

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  • Chandini Jaswal (6/28/2016 4:36:00 AM)

    Beautiful piece of poetry sir! I invite you to read my collection of poems and help me improve them with your valuable feedback.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, September 19, 2016