As We Meet Our Time Comments

'as' 'yet' 'but' 'and' - there is a ferocious rigidity to your poems. Perhaps you have one way of looking at things and should experiment a little! It follows this structure in each poem, try to experiment with structure and stop using flow-on lines all the time. Dont need to join all verses to make these long sentences with 'as' yet and 'but' lol It was okay for a few, but come on man. a mind needs to be fluid not so conclusive in form. Freedom awaits you! .. with respect, zubyre.

time is the best healer, but it does kills a lot of good things tht once we had...'TIME'.........it really makes things look diffrent.......what was may not be now and vice versa....but thts the law of nature..........lovely.......thnx for sharing love n peace dolly

Time flying, time burning, passing through life.