Thursday, June 13, 2019

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I will miss you as the days between talking give way to months,
as the inches between us slip into miles,
as the state lines separating us grow in number,
as the memory of your face starts to fade,
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Aimee Kiefer
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C F 13 June 2019

Quite a portrayal of longing after a breakup, very good write.10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2019

as the inches between us slip into miles, as the state lines separating us grow in number, as the memory of your face starts to fade, I will miss you for so much longer.. love, missing. sadness. very well portrayed in this short poem. thank u dear poetess. tony

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