Assailed Comments

really enjoyed reading well done

A child emerges trembling, scared With all her secrets bare........................quite evocative, wrought ingenious by imagerty,10+++, thanks for sharing

oooo Tess! Scathing and harsh! This is my favorite line: 'Assailed by sudden hostile wind Insulted mindlessly She tries to salvage what she can Hiding obsessively' Nice choice of words in this poem. Good job.

nice work tess, , , , touching piece!