At First Sight Poem by John Lupin

At First Sight

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I'm sinking;
In a bog lost somewhere in my imagination.
Time stands still,
I see the hummingbirds feed.
I am unable to breathe;
Air becomes concrete around my soul
If death comes, I would embrace her invitation;
as I have never felt so much.
If she knew, only I existed.

Friday, September 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When I first saw the missing part of me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 September 2014

This is depression rearing its ugly head. You really captured the feeling very well in this poem. A lovely piece, penned nicely to hammer home the point. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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