Friday, September 26, 2014

At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sinking;
In a bog lost somewhere in my imagination.
Time stands still,
I see the hummingbirds feed.
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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2014

This is depression rearing its ugly head. You really captured the feeling very well in this poem. A lovely piece, penned nicely to hammer home the point. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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