Sunday, July 28, 2019

At Midnight Comments

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She called him to be a guest -
She desired - and could find,
The one who could spin her head
In the dark of the blue night.
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Liza Sud
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Unnikrishnan E S 28 July 2019

Hi Liza, Pretty long poem. Too unlike of Liza. Loved the way you constructed the story, without every slipping into. Even when you say, “How sweet it is to copulate “, it looks as if you are not speaking of. Loved reading, With a look he pierces her, as if kissing by an eye, lifting her soul to the sky where big kisses are so hot.

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