Saturday, November 27, 2010

At Winter's Door Comments

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Soft leaves float gently carpeting your path as we strolled in the Fall, when you fell into my arms of wanting.

Like a lifting gentle breeze that swirled amongst the leaves you whispered a warm love upon my ear, which is inclined to hear your soft echoes.
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Jean Dament 27 November 2010

A lovely poem that had a great flow to it. I liked how you wove the seasons so easily together with the love story within. Well done. Spiritsong

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