Atheist's Lament Poem by Lauren Kjar

Atheist's Lament

Rating: 3.5


I sat all alone not making a sound
Patiently hoping that you'd come around
They say I'll just know once you appear
So far, it's still only me sitting here
I guess there is something that I must have missed
Or maybe, the facts say, you just don't exist
Everyones saying you can't be described
And no one can tell me just where you reside
Mom always said 'look before you leap'
But my cautious ways are upsetting the sheep
They bleat of their shepard, an almighty force
That he is the one who determines our course
Conveniently absent when dishing out blame
Yet for every achievement, his blessings lay claim
Follow the rules and never lose faith
You'll be rewarded at the heavenly gates
But if decided your score is too low
Down to a fiery hell you will go
Just follow the guide, it'll all be a breeze
Thanks for the worship and no questions please

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hannah Noelle 13 December 2013

This is an actual decent poem about Atheism. I love it. Couldn't have written anything like this if I had tried.; 3

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