poet Erica Francis

Erica Francis

Attack Of The Killer Pimentos

I saw this movie
that was about tomatoes

It made me smile
because they rolled around
and killed people

I was eating olives
and I realized
the pimento in the middle
was the same colour
as the killer tomatoes

And I giggled to myself

But then he asked
'what are you laughing at? '
and I just smiled
and poured olive juice down his shirt.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 1, 2005
Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 14, 2009

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Comments about Attack Of The Killer Pimentos by Erica Francis

  • Erica Francis (1/14/2009 3:59:00 AM)

    K. i fixed it. I agree. Last version was too sappy.

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  • Bernard Henrie (2/9/2008 10:58:00 PM)

    i would add or somehow include this-


    the pimentos continued to snore.

    kissing softly is fine...could the last line, however, be a bit less greeting card, a bit more biting? memorable? unexpected?

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