Erica Francis

Rookie - 3 Points (January 7,1988 - September 17,2078 / Columbus, OH)

Something Improper - Poem by Erica Francis

For a woman like me
it is improper
to act such things.

But it is only acceptable
when I do so
through poetry.

So now
my hand is in your pants
in the back of number 18
in the easton theater.

Comments about Something Improper by Erica Francis

  • (11/10/2005 11:26:00 AM)

    Tai, your appology is accepted. I hope you accept mine for whatever I have done to offend you. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/9/2005 4:03:00 PM)

    You are right callisto. I apologise. I have removed the offending rant! I allowed my emotions to get the better of me. Your poem is insightful. Hope that is ok? Tai (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2005 8:53:00 PM)

    I feel very insulted by your comments, Tai.

    I don't know if you mean it that way, but I mean it this way: if you're malicious with your words, don't leave them here. They're unappreciated.
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  • (11/6/2005 6:52:00 PM)

    Dear Tai, I only have a day over months until I am no longer jailbait. Thank you for your concern though. (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2005 6:14:00 PM)

    Wow. I haven't found the seats at the Easton 18 to be all that accommodating, the arm rests seem a bit bulky for such adventures. (Report) Reply

  • Lucy Burrow (11/6/2005 5:30:00 PM)

    How true! I really like this poem. excellent idea and well said!
    Regards, Lucy
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  • (11/6/2005 5:25:00 PM)

    Sounds like Jail bait to me Callisto! lol 8 for imagination. Grinning Tai (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2005 5:23:00 PM)

    I like how you can express it at least through poetry you're right though saying this in everyday conversation would just freak everyone out. I like it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 6, 2005

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