Aunt Cindy, I Miss You Poem by Jayce McCormick

Aunt Cindy, I Miss You

Rating: 3.5


I remember the fun I had with you
All the times we shared
Going to the park and eating ice-cream
And all the times you came for thanksgiving

But then it came, that fateful day
You discovered you had cancer
They treated you with kemo, but it didn't really help
And you eventually died

I was saddenned in my heart
For me and the rest of my family
Because I would never see you again on Earth
And we wouldn't again meet your glee

But I know you are in a better place now
With God somewhere up in the clouds
And he is taking care of you
And forever will....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 21 February 2007

A very good effort Jayce. Shows the right kind of concerns and understanding. Keep reading good poetry and keep working at your own art. Don't be afraid to write the way you want to, and don't be pressured by short term fashions - they're as prevalent in the world of poetry as elsewhere. All the best.

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