Autumn Poem by Shiami Thayalakumar

Autumn

Rating: 4.5


Lying under the trees
watching the colorful leaves
feeling the fresh breeze
until the sun leaves

Tuesday, December 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,beauty,relaxing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 December 2015

Nicely encapsulated train of thought, well articulated and insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme. Good depicting beauty of Autumn written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Shiami. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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