Friday, February 8, 2008

Autumn's End Comments

Rating: 2.8

In a shadowy wooded knell
where elves likely dwell
yellow leaves flutter
gently to the soil
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Michael Pruchnicki
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Ben Gieske 08 March 2008

You present a plenitude of images which arouses one's imagination inviting one to calmly survey the scenery - but not for long. The final line is unexpectant and quite shatering.

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