Awakening(2) Poem by mandara pookal

Awakening(2)

Rating: 3.2


Yesterday's memory beseiged
Thoughts realm in flowing spurts
Human inconsistencies' known joys
Without doubt augured as natural

The soul's search is preciously sanctified
Divinity in its wholesome appeal
The other's innermost desires respected
Blended in with one's own realisations

Denial of mankind's spirit that's haloed
Receives less than joyful giving
Perching upheavals of joys that rebound
Rousing quietly the destiny of minds' truths

Mirth's finesse lies quietly in the shade
Only to be sublimely awakened
To reveal threadbare the complexity of female pride
Through the softest touch of the male's savoured guts


Explanation:

So many bitter sweet memories that linger flow and bring back the joys of realisation of faults and follies that were not understood then as natural.

The soul searches another equally divinely awakened soul and wishes to respect the desires of the other with a willingness to blend and understand the purpose and fulfilment in the self through the other.

Man is generous but refrains from realising that he gives more then he receives and gets the joys through giving and knowing the consequences will continue his search for happiness through giving and prepare for his known destiny

Man is conscious of his joys and subtle desires which are touched by the purity of another in thought, words and action though sublime but reaches the goal of softening the female pride through the softer understanding of the male who cares. Finally it is love that wins the spirit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2009

When a man touches a female heart he touches it firm...female pride takes time to analyze the sincerity behind and once softness identified and accepted she wraps him up in whole...the truth wonders and complexities of man-woman relationship have been well portrayed in this good poem...the words pride and softness have been used as good poetic tools...thanks...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 November 2009

amazing poem on awakening...bringing in a male and female aspect into it...truly lovely...goes into my favs

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