mandara pookal


^ Her Pride - Poem by mandara pookal

She's soft as a feather
Spilling with pride
Sailing smooth waters
A swan that just glides

She's rave as the winter
Chilled and quite strong
She admits her follies
Sometimes she is wrong

She's cool as the summer breeze
No talking in haste
She manages the scene well
No hurry no waste

She's funny and witty
Call her a super clown
She's cautious and serene now
Ne'er takes things sitting down

She's early at sunrise
Some pure thoughts that gleam
A crystal clear sweetness
She spells out in streams

She's happy and content too
Quite rare find just now
So humble and merry
Call her a sweet dove

She's patient and passionate
A need that's divine
Her wants are so simple
Her thoughts to intertwine

She's thoughtful and eloquent
Woos man with great pride
To deal with a pleasure
She's honest on her side

She's quiet and quite silent
As watches and waits
Other's feelings she owns well
Her poems she creates


Comments about ^ Her Pride by mandara pookal

  • Indira Renganathan (12/18/2009 4:39:00 AM)


    I'm reminded of those ending lines of a nursery rhyme'mother's pet, lovely too, is that you? ...no doubt, you're becomming everybody's pet....a nice adorable poem...and what is mandara poo in tamil...thank you (Report) Reply

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  • (12/12/2009 10:16:00 AM)


    Wow..Lovely Lady is she. (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2009 5:48:00 AM)


    you have very eloquently portrayed that 'she' of yours and her pride, Mandara...a wonderful she, she must be!
    the poem well versed, the words just glide over the lines swan like, on a serene pond-face...as an outsider, i feel this write contain telling indicative imageries! 10
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (12/6/2009 4:37:00 AM)


    'She's early at sunrise
    Some pure thoughts that gleam
    A crystal clear sweetness
    She spells out in streams...'
    That's beautiful write. Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it
    10+
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 5, 2009


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