Monday, May 30, 2011

Ayo Poetiri Comments

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Mouth raging, wished words had guage
Tongues flapping in pages
Souls shouting in cages
Words racing in paces
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Tobi Praise Obanisola
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Dominic Hontonnu 10 August 2011

i like dis it so natural and dayo pls use simple language when writin let those that does nt like poem enjoy ur words. Yes u r gud hop 2 hear 4rm u soon

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G.Y Hammed 08 August 2011

Your verses shows your mind is truly enslaved by wisdom but it is quite humble of you to say your speech and writing are justified by ignorance. You are a poet, but if you can still find another means of expressing your thoughts so beautifully as this, I don't know what else to call you. Obscure title though; Tobi, this is an excellent poem!

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