iron panda 23

Rookie - 3 Points (23rd of january / a land of unknown)

Ayuki's Storybook - Poem by iron panda 23

An adventure gone wrong
ayuki says in a song
this must me how it should be
they come and they go
goodbye and hello
but who are the ones that are
here to stay? ?

Replay the memories in her mind
and now with her
go back in time
view it all...the ups and the downs
come back to the present
to see what hasnt happened
why this adventure has
such a dark page

Look! ! you see? ?
that line right there...
just read...it says...

'she met some people
whom she thought she knew
they said to her `we're here for you`
not everone who said it is still around
they abandoned them...still lost
not found'...

She sits and thinks
of which ones are still there
she counts a few
at least one...should she care? ?
her trust is so limited
that there hardly isnt any
but ayuki takes the risk
of being hurt by so many

She said she wanted to say goodbye
but for some reason...she just couldnt...
so she decided to come back
since some said they cared
but where are they now? ?
most certainly not here

Right now in the story
ayuki's doing fine
wishing people wouldnt lie to her
and would stop wasting her time
for now we're going to close this here book
until we meet again to have another look

~IP23


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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, February 10, 2012


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