Baby Face Poem by Ivana Valasik

Baby Face

Rating: 5.0


An old woman
Is staring at me
In the mirror

What happened to my
Baby face?

What happened to
My baby face?

It caught up
With my ancient
Soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Mayo 30 March 2021

You're lucky. While I, too, am staring into the abyss, I fear my soul is still wet behind the ears. I hope your ancient soul gave you some guidance along the way. I was flying blind and it showed every step of the way. (how's that for mixing metaphors?) I like your poem.

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