Sunday, October 8, 2006

Back To Square One Comments

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It is hard for me to be back to square one
I know that I am carrying this havy burden for a long time
It is hard for me to be back to square one
Because every time something happens to my life
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 04 July 2014

This poem is so interesting. It is filled with self-awareness that I'm not sure if the poet even realizes he's made. A wonderful glimpse into the poets mind.

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Jessy Liz 23 February 2007

Interesting flow in the repetitive line 'Back to square one'. Neatly done.

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Aldo Kraas

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