Ballad To Just Another Falling Star Poem by Aldo Kraas

Ballad To Just Another Falling Star



Please
keep your eyes open
So you can see
Another falling star
That is falling from the sky
Today
Right now

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 04 July 2014

I really like this little poem, but I feel the need to make the correction that you should have used the word tonight instead of today. I think it would be very hard to catch a glimpse of a falling star in the daylight.......

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Aldo Kraas

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Sao Paulo Brazil
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