Bare Poem by lei vicente

Bare

Rating: 5.0


the land is dying
no breath to grasp
the leaves are still
no wind to make them dance

the moon is pale
no light to glare
the sun is hiding
refusing to rise

this is my world
bare and dull
all in grey
but not doomed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 15 September 2013

Yup sometimes we live gloom as written by fate. However, life is eternal struggle one should not loose heart we said Lei! I like this very much as it is fascinating...

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