Barefoot On The Lane Comments

Wow! I don't want to make a statement that seems too exaggerated to be true, so let me just say: THIS IS MY FAVORITE POEM OF SUMMER OF 2016! ! I just love its sincerity, its humor, its wonderful celebration of togetherness. I like INNOCENCE as the topic. And that is echoed in the closing image: WHY NOT CLEANSE OUR LIVES BY AN INNOCENT HUG? Why not! I'm convinced. This is your parallel poem to my O AND E poem. You are barefoot in this poem just as I described Eurydice on the lane. Your poem makes me happy! I won't debate my choice of words. Happy identifies my present mood and it will take something really bad to dispel. I don't see that happening. Liza, you're the sweetness of life.