Sunday, June 16, 2013

Barking Dogs And Crying Children Comments

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This is the manuscript lost in the woods:
Peter Pan before the head hits the pillow—
Woebegone thought tossed to a wave,
And then the night proceeds
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Robert Rorabeck
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 June 2013

the last two lines speak the truth loudly as the barking dogs which caution the owners out of love and the crying children who demonstrate to get their parental love..Bret..I can't hate you for writing like this..Good work.

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