Bas-Relief Poem by Lonnie Hicks

Bas-Relief

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She stepped up
and removed her coat placing it beside her
and turned slightly.

She took her cocked hat, twisted it
and let it fall to the floor;
it landed askew.

Hesitating she dabbed her eyes
to remove the makeup there
and the foundation too.

The pins in the hair were identified
pinched and removed;
each pin planted in the pin-cushion on the bureau.

A single shaft of sun-light was forming
retreating across the floor toward the window.

Standing in place
her hair fell softly around her shoulders;
she shook it loose
while stepping down out of her shoes
moving them aside.

They made a little rubble pile of things past
and the promise of things new.

She fingered her blouse.

Each pearl button snapped
releasing the cloth
and a v-shape formed at the top;
each snap deepening the mystery
that the emerging bra revealed.

Her thin hands flutter again
and solider-straight her blouse line
is now straight up and down;
her breathing motivating the motion
of her chest expanding and contracting.

Life to her
in that moment
was a driving engine, irresistible.

Her blouse left her finger-tips and floated
away
landing on the floor flower-petal style
arranging itself it seemed on the carpeting;
a soft white thing arrayed within a hieroglyph
of shoes, cocked hat, red coat and abandoned makeup kit-
and her satin-red pin-cushion.

Her bra snaps and falls away, down to the plush floor
rounded pyramids on the sandstone colored carpeting
joining the assemblage there;

hiding and revealing some Rosetta stone of meaning.

Bare-breasted she stood exhibiting nature's bare skin-
its givings and takings;
one nipple touched now in that gathering light,
one breath lifting it- seeming to accentuate
and simulate the rising of some nipple-dappled sun.

She stepped out of her panties trembling
for it was the last act she knew
would be the last act
before becoming fully naked;

all of her now revealed
a mixed cauldron of leaping
swirling emotions;
evaluations and assessments
condemnations and praises-
she was the bas-relief in her own hieroglyph;
her own collage of tossed aside clothing

He said 'You look so beautiful.'

She turned swiftly removing the last of it;
her Soul reaching
offering that to him too
on this their wedding eve
before their wedding night.

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