Breathe Me Poem by Lonnie Hicks

Breathe Me

Rating: 3.1


Come closer;

I need to feel
your body
heat.

Your breath,
on my face;

I paint
you inside my eyes
so I can see you
all the time-

look at the
nape
of your neck,
its curvature;

your eyes.

All slopes away
to my waiting soul
which pauses
at odds times
in the day to
look at you.

My finger tip
has a tiny glow
as I trace
across your lips;

as I move close behind you
worshiping in that cathedral body space
between us;
static electricities crackle;
small lighting bolts
spark.

Give me;
your anticipation;
drape me
in your contour
as we
sooth screaming desire
furtively.

Put my hand
beside your face;
my mouth to your mouth

as I feel your body tingling
tremoring,
soft quakings
from kneading touches
which occasion
others:
stellar propulsions
and more lighting strike intensities.

You exhale slowly;
intake again,
swelling;
your breath is a
warm effusion and egress
surging into me
lung ward
between soft lips;

where all settles in
like home;
I feel you quiver
and release.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

so sweet and pure.. I like this a lot.. Nicely written piece

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Reshma Ramesh 02 December 2008

superb write......................10! !

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Bree Z Love 29 September 2018

Excellent Love Poem...We share a common tread. Love you Uncle Lonnie

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2017

I paint you inside my eyes so I can see you all the time- I feel you quiver and release..very good poem.. love, eros, sensations, feelings.. all these you have captured in this poem and depicted it well. thank you dear poet. tony

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Bree Z Love 29 September 2018

He is an amazing Poet. My 1st Uncle. We keep Love going.

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Ramesh Rai 10 September 2014

Soulful write..........Loved the way you depicted each line.

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Fiona Davidson 05 December 2008

wow....absolutly stunning piece of poetry Lonnie...beautiful....Fi

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Stephanie Fiddy 03 December 2008

Beautiful! i give it a perfect 10 :)

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