Lonnie Hicks

Freshman - 813 Points (www.lonniehicks.com / Chicago Ill)

Breathe Me - Poem by Lonnie Hicks

Come closer;

I need to feel
your body

Your breath,
on my face;

I paint
you inside my eyes
so I can see you
all the time-

look at the
of your neck,
its curvature;

your eyes.

All slopes away
to my waiting soul
which pauses
at odds times
in the day to
look at you.

My finger tip
has a tiny glow
as I trace
across your lips;

as I move close behind you
worshiping in that cathedral body space
between us;
static electricities crackle;
small lighting bolts

Give me;
your anticipation;
drape me
in your contour
as we
sooth screaming desire

Put my hand
beside your face;
my mouth to your mouth

as I feel your body tingling
soft quakings
from kneading touches
which occasion
stellar propulsions
and more lighting strike intensities.

You exhale slowly;
intake again,
your breath is a
warm effusion and egress
surging into me
lung ward
between soft lips;

where all settles in
like home;
I feel you quiver
and release.

Comments about Breathe Me by Lonnie Hicks

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/26/2017 12:57:00 AM)

    I paint
    you inside my eyes
    so I can see you
    all the time- I feel you quiver
    and release..very good poem.. love, eros, sensations, feelings.. all these you have captured in this poem and depicted it well. thank you dear poet. tony
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  • Ramesh Rai (9/10/2014 6:01:00 PM)

    Soulful write..........Loved the way you depicted each line. (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2008 11:55:00 PM)

    the passion and lust is amazingly transcribed through the detail of the write, to have such strong feelings and urges to be with someone is truly powerful, amazing poem, i loved it (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2008 12:38:00 PM)

    wow....absolutly stunning piece of poetry Lonnie...beautiful....Fi (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2008 4:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful! i give it a perfect 10 :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2008 3:06:00 AM)

    superb write......................10! ! (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2008 11:46:00 PM)

    so sweet and pure.. I like this a lot.. Nicely written piece (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 22, 2011