Sunday, June 28, 2009

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Broken down with broken dreams
Nothing lasts at the seems
Tainted love from the start
You can’t feel the beat of my heart
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Brandon Bizon
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you have some potential in you.................go with it........ i pray better days come.

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Broken down with broken dreams Nothing lasts at the seems Tainted love from the start You can’t feel the beat of my heart...... very good write dear.. but deams not come true... it is reflection ofur true llove.... keep it up.. read mine all dreams not come true, , , , mary to marry and how are u?

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Nooruddeen Mm 30 June 2009

Dear Brandon You have done a good job, Nice writing Keep writing Rgds Noor

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