Be... Poem by Majid Gaggi

Be...



Be careful, be free
Be stable like the tree
Be in your spot, don't flee
Stand, never bends your knee
For that you have to drink tea
Or even drink some coffee
Be active just like the bee
As you hear as you see
It is hard to ride the sea
Like that you have to be
You will get a great degree
Get these advices, and agree

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2017

your poem curves like a woman's torso, fine. it's created by each consecutive poetic line. how many more lines to rhyme with these? lines about seas, trees, knees, and degrees? ? bri :)

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