Be Human! Poem by Dhruv Bhasn

Be Human!

Rating: 4.5


Those who finish a race by falling
others are a bad storm.
Those who finish a race caring about
only them don't deserve the human norm.
But those who finish a race by picking the
fallen ones are human in its purest form!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Foor 24 January 2013

I cant tell if this is working but I like that alot. Check out some of my work if you have the time. I would appreciate that.

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Matthew Foor 24 January 2013

I like that. Alot actually. Well done. Would love for you to check out some of my work.

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Vishal Sharma 24 January 2013

NICE VERSE..liked by me, ...check mine too

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