Friday, April 7, 2006

Be My Saviour Comments

Rating: 4.3

I run like hell
Seeing nothing anymore
Tears blur my vision
There is nowhere to hide
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Melissa Koeman
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Georgios Venetopoulos 15 February 2013

Were you in tears when you wrote this? Your ability to portray your feelings is your first quality in writing. Come back and we'll compose new poems with more advanced writing styles. Keep well. (:

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