Dom Hunt

Rookie - 16 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

Be Still In The Moment - Poem by Dom Hunt

Be still in the moment
Let time stand still
No more torment
Take my fill

Words fly around
Smile escapes your lips
My dreams abound
Hard to eclipse

 So  close I can smell
The essence  of you
What's on your mind I can't tell
Hours pass they are to few

You move  away
Not seeing my heart
Trying too stay
From falling apart

My time is done
You have to go
Your the only one
Can make me so

Comments about Be Still In The Moment by Dom Hunt

  • (9/2/2012 3:56:00 AM)

    this poem reminded me of carpe diam..well written..I like how you have rhymed it...keep in touch.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • June Walker (7/15/2012 5:08:00 AM)

    Beautifully written. Lyrical rythm is very soothing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 20, 2012

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