Beautiful Moon 🌙❣️ Poem by joe acacia

Beautiful Moon 🌙❣️

Rating: 5.0

with you, i just want to slow time.
and just feel the wind
running through my ears.
just you and me.
under the same sky
listening to our favorite song.

see, she is a warm melody.
a rhythm relaxing my mind.
in the meantime,
i know she is special.
she might not be perfect
but yet she is attractive.
and before i know it,
her smile becomes my heart beat.
i can't deny it
the star in my eyes is only you.


#J.G.⭐
the blooming spring🌸

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Timber Koleden 29 June 2026

This line is the is my heartbeat when I think of the person I love: 'the star in my eyes is only you'. You could not hardly have said it better!

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Timber Koleden 29 June 2026

I know just how you are feeling in this poem--you express your love for her with such moving imagery and devotion! This poem is a proper love poem, and of poetry some of my favorites are love poems! Thank you for sharing this with us, Joe!

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joe acacia 08 July 2026

thankyou so much for your warm and beautiful comments. i really appreciate

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Timber Koleden 29 June 2026

I can't believe it took me so long to find this poem! This is such a beautiful poem--but isn't that the way it is? How can we write about love and not write beautifully!

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