Brenna Hartic


Beautiful Moon - Poem by Brenna Hartic

As I look out the window in that dark room of mine
I see a creature so beautiful and fine
Pondering for hours on what can it be

But the time went fast and dark went to light
And that beautiful creature could not be seen
For that beautiful creature was the moon
And I will see it again very, very soon.

Brenna
age 13


Comments about Beautiful Moon by Brenna Hartic

  • Tom BalchTom Balch (10/12/2008 6:24:00 PM)

    You write well Brenna, I really love this piece 10/10. Regards Tom (Report)Reply

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  • Stephanie Dower (10/12/2008 5:06:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. You are very talented for your age. Keep writing! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 12, 2008


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