Its a beautiful Night
Stars sparkling like diamonds,
Playing hide N seek with silver clouds
Itsy- bitsy buds dancing in the moonlight
Raindrops kissing my cheeks
Memories flooding my eyes
I stand alone in the balcony
Missing someone badly
Someone who promised to be with me
Next time when it rains
But everything was a lie
And he taught me how to cry
Little did my heart knew
That promises are made to be broken
He walked away with his new life
Leaving behind my withering heart
Alas! He doesn't know what he lost
Rather, he never deserved true love
Its time to say good bye to memories,
To leave behind the pain and tears
The Night is still beautiful
My dreams are still alive
Waiting for a new dawn
A new beginning!
Jilt and poseur he is…but your fantastic romance with Night will fill the gap…till you get a befitting one …exceptional passion added in description in portraying night…write more please.. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
'...promised to be with me Next time when it rains But everything was a lie And he taught me how to cry'... sad an poignant words...love is a cunning game-master Deepthi...often thows you out of the field you unaware...the quoted words constitute the soul of this poem...a 'grieving' soul...10 well composed poem...
It was a nice poem..with all the beauties of imagination and usage of apt words. Wish you all the best
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I would like to translate this poem
The Night is still beautiful My dreams are still alive Waiting for a new dawn A new beginning! thank God that you end with hope. nice conclusion always in ur poems i read. wait for a new dawn.. it is going to come.. a real love in life. God will grant to u.