Deepthi Vincent

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Beautiful Night - Poem by Deepthi Vincent

Its a beautiful Night
Stars sparkling like diamonds,
Playing hide N seek with silver clouds
Itsy- bitsy buds dancing in the moonlight

Raindrops kissing my cheeks
Memories flooding my eyes
I stand alone in the balcony
Missing someone badly

Someone who promised to be with me
Next time when it rains
But everything was a lie
And he taught me how to cry

Little did my heart knew
That promises are made to be broken
He walked away with his new life
Leaving behind my withering heart

Alas! He doesn't know what he lost
Rather, he never deserved true love
Its time to say good bye to memories,
To leave behind the pain and tears

The Night is still beautiful
My dreams are still alive
Waiting for a new dawn
A new beginning!


Comments about Beautiful Night by Deepthi Vincent

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (7/26/2010 12:07:00 PM)


    The Night is still beautiful
    My dreams are still alive
    Waiting for a new dawn
    A new beginning!

    thank God that you end with hope. nice conclusion always in ur poems i read.
    wait for a new dawn.. it is going to come.. a real love in life. God will grant to u.
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  • (5/23/2010 12:13:00 PM)


    Jilt and poseur he is…but your fantastic romance with Night will fill the gap…till you get a befitting one …exceptional passion added in description in portraying night…write more please..
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (5/21/2010 10:01:00 AM)


    '...promised to be with me
    Next time when it rains
    But everything was a lie
    And he taught me how to cry'...

    sad an poignant words...love is a cunning game-master Deepthi...often thows you out of the field you unaware...the quoted words constitute the soul of this poem...a 'grieving' soul...10
    well composed poem...
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  • (4/25/2010 2:59:00 AM)


    Very well written piece (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2010 2:18:00 AM)


    It was a nice poem..with all the beauties of imagination and usage of apt words.
    Wish you all the best
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 12, 2012


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