Alicia Gomez


Beautifully Broken - Poem by Alicia Gomez

Look at me
Would you believe
That no matter what is going on
I always feel some misery
I always am sad and i always feel mad
And I try to tell them
but they dont listen
They dont wanna hear
They dont wanna believe that im always
so angry and im always so miserable
And i dont know why
And i dont know how
I need you now more then ever
Please dont leave me hanging by a thread
Im already so full of dread
If you go this could destroy me
I would lose my cool
I would lose all common sense
Because its you that completes me
Its you that makes me happy
And everyday im falling piece by piece
Until Im completely shattered
And I dont wanna wait that long
Until I actually start to matter
Boy look me in the eye
Tell me you love me
Save my life
Because you are my token
Out from becoming
Beautifully broken


Comments about Beautifully Broken by Alicia Gomez

  • (3/20/2007 9:26:00 PM)

    i can tell this poem is straight from the heart so i gave it a 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (10/9/2006 8:44:00 PM)

    Beautifully Broken.. shaped by the wind. wait i know this one. don't tell me. Gov't
    Mule! or miss Simpson's play-off-their-title-pop-song-gar-bage..

    no offense meant. keep writing. this had passion. or frisson. Sus~
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  • (10/9/2006 8:06:00 PM)

    I really liked this poem great job I like the last lines give it that punch in the stomache feeling.
    Lylyanna
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 9, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 14, 2010


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