Because I Do Poem by josie mcmillan

Because I Do



you say you love me
but when you love someone you dont hurt them
the way you have hurt me!
i would never think of hurting you
because i do.......
love you! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 16 December 2009

Very short, But I adore the message the ending lines are very very good

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Craig Anderson 16 December 2009

Nice flow Josie and no, no one likes to be hurt. But the old saying you always hurt the one you love seems to be true on this occasion. Nice write. Regards. Craig.

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