josie mcmillan

Dying Goodbyes - Poem by josie mcmillan

As I lay dying
seeing the eagle flying
I close my eyes
from all the goodbyes
somethings seem to be unreal
but they are more real than I
the nightmare is just begining
from all the difficulties
and hatred used for all
the wrong and right reasons
as i breathe the light turns
to darkness

just so you all know josie is jossett mcmillan

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  • Craig Anderson (2/1/2010 11:43:00 AM)

    Excellent personal piece, that took me way outside and placed me on my back thinking.
    Nice one Josie. Keep it up. Will be looking for more.
    Regards. Craig.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 15, 2009

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