Becoming The Music Comments

Try Gluck. This is a great use of the Orpheus myth but I got that awful song ('You're Beautiful' I think it's called) in my head when I saw the second stanza. If I may be bold, but in the fourth stanza I think you should use ‘descended’, before ‘Heaven or harrowed Hell’ and I’m not too sure about the ‘harrowed’. But the overall execution of this works really well.

it's a wonderful piece of writing...and the way you have 'become' music is amazing...cheers