Bull Hawking

Before Both Of Us Can Feel....Part 1 - Poem by Bull Hawking

I should have been afraid
afraid of loosing you
utopia was a topic
but my trop-ics were too few

I should have been afraid
afraid of loosing you
but I never really owned you
never kept you on my pen

you were only ever there
only in my mind
nothing ever happened
but what happened in my mind

If I could have only kept you
kept you as my friend
I wouldn't be like gold ore
gold you never mined

If our troth had only
lived in truth

Topic(s) of this poem: afterlife

Poet's Notes about The Poem

not about anyone on this site

Comments about Before Both Of Us Can Feel....Part 1 by Bull Hawking

  • (12/24/2014 7:28:00 PM)

    Part 2.....is under the title.....if only truth was simple....

    Glad you liked it.....you are never boring.
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  • Ging Taping (10/22/2014 2:23:00 AM)

    Who knows.....love will always finds a way.. (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2014 4:14:00 PM)

    lol..you are right about the spelling of loosing but I misspell words for effect....it is a vocal clue to lengthen the vowel I am offending. in the end I meant if only our troth had lived in truth....troth....being an antiquated word meaning....loyal or pledged faithfulness. Thanks for your comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 24, 2014

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