Sammy's Notes

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Before The Eyes - Poem by Sammy's Notes

All around in the air...
Straigh through the horizon and storm
It's all so clear...
Our world, that's falling into thousand pieces

Can't see through the blur and smudge...
Broken on our knees to serve the machine
The wheel goes on and on, generation to another..
We slay to go no where

All around before my eyes...
People with their ignorante acts and minds
There is no future for us...
As long as the mankind is meant to be blind.


Comments about Before The Eyes by Sammy's Notes

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/5/2008 2:29:00 PM)


    The wheel goes on and on, generation to another..
    We slay to go no where.............................really fascinating, i do enjoy the way you think, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
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  • Joe Breunig (4/3/2008 12:31:00 PM)


    An interesting piece; yes, there are many levels of blindness that one must push through - the use of faith is the most effective methodology; nicely done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008



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