Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Being Broken Comments

Rating: 4.8

And the dream died
in flashes
you had time but it
burnt to ashes
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Saurabh singh
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Geeta sharma 07 April 2019

Emotions and feelings are being conveyed beautifuly..

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 June 2017

A good optimistic start. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 18 April 2017

The deplorable condition of life at its lowest ebb is aptly captured in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Saurabh and welcome to Poemhunter.

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