Thursday, January 5, 2006

Being Myself Again Comments

Rating: 4.0

I realized that I wasn’t myself anymore
The world was passing me by
I lost myself in misconceptions
Lost myself in strange illusions
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Melissa Koeman
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Georgios Venetopoulos 15 February 2013

This one is not a poem but a narrative piece of prose. Still, your reason behind the writing is evident. You are reciting the events in your life, along with your actions and reconsider. Correct thinking and reciting.

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Moya Levy 05 January 2006

Lovely poem Melissa, think I'm still looking for bits of me! Moyax

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Charles Chaim Wax 05 January 2006

a great tale of discovery searching for your True Self through the maze of existence and the search shall go on and on until; a taste of certainty makes it all right a fine poem

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