Belief When Bemused Comments

An exceptional gathering of poetic verse, penned by a poet who has the ability to bring readers into the poem to rest in it's beauty. I sensed the silence in the blinking sky, watched the flowers blush in beauty. I pictured the darkened sky over the rainbow and was captivated and held within this beautiful treasured poem until the end. Thank you Doctor for a most beautiful experience. --Melvina--

Doctor-the mystical eliment of faith wrinkled by the unforeseen events has been pictorised wonderfully-full 10 marks

This is like a wholesome triple decker sandwich: the outer 'beginning and end' are worth picking at until you fill up in the middle... worthy of digestion... One Peace at a Time... xxx

Twilight faded and street lights came on. Skirting...circle moving through the shadows.the bridge that began the road out...stopping when pain became too severe.