Believe Poem by shraddha bhatt

Believe

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they doubted you
they laughed on you
they never believed you
they were sure about your failure
you heard them
you started believing the same
you failed you injured
you started thinking
you realized it was not the truth
you started again
they were same
you ignored them
you won the battle
you defeated the luck
it was not their thoughts in the first time which
gave you failure
it was your assumption of failure
which made it happen
do what they say you cannot do
believe in your words which your heart says to
your mind
never allow someone to control your actions
believe in you
be the you...!

Believe
Friday, August 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,motivational,you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when you doubt yourself you must read it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 23 August 2016

Hi Shraddha, Fantastic poem. Exuding the power of positive thinking. Let me quote from Bhagavat Gita, Uddharedatman Aatmanam Na aatmanam avasadayet Aatmasya hi aatmano bandhu- raatmaiva ripuratmana: Swami Chinmayanandaji has translated the shloka as follows: Let man lift himself by his own self alone and let him not lower himself. For, this self alone is the friend of oneself and this self is the enemy of oneself. Nice poem. Loved reading. Do continue to write and share. A full ten for the positive energy.

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Shraddha B. 23 August 2016

thank you sir for a fantastic explaination i am so glad that experties like you are giving us good platform to share the thoughts thank you for the reading...

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Kelly Kurt 19 August 2016

An inspirational poem, Shraddha. Thank you

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Shraddha B. 19 August 2016

thank you for your appreciation

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Gajanan Mishra 19 August 2016

believe in you, great love, go on..

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Shraddha B. 19 August 2016

Thanks for the motivation..!

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