Beneath The Sea Poem by Pat Kunisch

Beneath The Sea

Rating: 5.0


Beneath the wilderness of murky waters,
Deaf to the sound of the howling wind,
Sea Creatures dressed in wondrous colors,
In graceful dance they float and swim.

Their world a universe of peaceful valleys,
Of mountains, caves and foliage green.
The gentle, swirly, wavy motion,
Of water all around is seen.

Dreaming echoes drift through sleepy waters,
As throbbing heartbeats voice their sound.
Sea Creatures guard their mystic wisdom,
While stormy winds above soar 'round.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I reckon you could capture my diving bubbles as you take me deeper, as well as you gently lap these creatures in picture perfect poetry......

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Mimi Fakhira 13 January 2009

Sea creatures, underwater landscapes and the deep blue seea... your poem is just so magical! It's the kind people will enjoy. I'm totally adding this to my favourites. Keep it up!

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